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Flower

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Description

Flower in Hawaii.
Image size
800x600px 70.63 KB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon PowerShot SD1200 IS
Shutter Speed
1/251 second
Aperture
F/8.0
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
80
Date Taken
May 18, 2011, 2:37:02 AM
Sensor Size
6mm
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Simplicity is a nice way to capture a good picture. This shows a deep focus on the subject, with a good emphasis to its color and shape, with great clarity that shows every delicate twist and turn of its lovely petals, very nice work there.

The only part I'd say I could see some improvement done is maybe a bit more experimenting with positioning. Its definitely better than just having it spot on in the middle, but maybe back away a bit and get it on the lower half, or get closer and make it an abstract super-macro shot. There's an endless list of what you could do with positioning, but I'd encourage some exploration there!

Overall, this is a great, lovely piece. Simple, not too complex, and aesthetically pleasing to the viewer. Great job!